Blog Post #4

Wednesday in class I talked to my peers about my rhetorical analysis. Parker and Avery gave me great feedback. Though, they gave me feedback, they mostly said that my rhetorical analysis was almost there. They said I just need to add a few more details and it will be complete. Most of the feedback was helpful. The most helpful advice I got from my two people was to reference the sources that I got the information from. Another idea that was helpful was to give more evidence to support my claims. Parker told me to try looking up information in pop culture about my stakeholders. I really thought that was a great idea. Also Parker said to reference more of the words in my last visual image. I thought they would make my analysis stronger. After considering all the information I decided to use all the information. They information they gave me could make my rhetorical analysis stronger. Right now it’s okay, but with a few more details I cold make it extremely better. First, I will go through my analysis and change any grammatical or spelling errors. Second, I will make my analysis have paragraphs. Then, I will go to the websites and reference my sources. After that, I will go to the pop culture website and look up information to help support my evidence. Next, I will go to my images and talk about the visual elements in the second one. Then, I will go to my last image and talk about how the different words in the picture all tie together.